Poetry DNA version:
In this short poem, the words “Not yet I said / hoping to avoid the pitch” became, after a bit of editing, the piano phrase you hear in the song.
The original spoken word version:
Peripatetic Salesman in Brendle’s Parking Lot One October Afternoon (originally written sometime in the ’80s, when Brendle’s stores still rang cash registers in the American South)
Hey bossman
he said
Are you Christmas shoppin’?
Not yet, I said
hoping to avoid the pitch
Too late:
He was holding out already a napkin
cupped in his hands
like an offering
Nestled inside
lay a necklace
coiled like a snake
sleeping in white desert sand
Fourteen carat, twenty inches
he said
Mmm, I said, that’s nice
but I’m not in the market
Gotta light? he asked
and that’s when
I saw
the unlit cigarette
dangling
from parched lips
–Jr. James